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Alabaster Box
Contributed by
Bob18Dylan
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Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 01:46:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Inside of me there is this box
full of feeling and emotion
all priceless to you
At certain times I break this box
and sprinkle upon your heart its contents
and you are left with the aroma of my love
And every day I want you to bask in this
a thing called love
This Alabaster box; for you, will never turn barren
Copyright ©
Bob18Dylan
... [
2005-08-01 01:46:52]
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Re: Alabaster Box
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by ElevenToedSloth on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 01:53:36 AM AEST
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| Semi bland. I think it could use a little work. |
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Re: Alabaster Box
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 08:06:40 AM AEST
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I like the images,
a box inside someone,
full of feeling and emotion,
broken and sprinkled...
It set a mood for me
and drew me in emotionally.
--Ghost |
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Re: Alabaster Box
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by vibes2go on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 01:39:29 PM AEST
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| very unique |
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