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DESCRIBE
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 01:15:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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DESCRIBE
Stories have been written
many have been told
None can match the real thing
when a woman in your arms you hold
When physical attraction gets you
there are no words to Describe
The sensations you are feeling
are impossible to hide
You kiss this lovely lady
a soft caress as well
To Describe what she is feeling
only she can tell
As you look into her eyes
its magic you see there
It sets you all aglow
to be with one so fair
She in turn is swooning
as you kiss her, over and over again
You both lie down together
the question, now is when
We will leave the rest to your imagination
as to how this story ended
It is better that way, we think
so no one becomes offended
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2005-08-01 01:15:42]
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Re: DESCRIBE
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by ElevenToedSloth on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 01:24:23 AM AEST
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| I have a bruse neopet. |
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Re: DESCRIBE
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by Bob18Dylan on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 01:41:21 AM AEST
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| Good write. Nice way of putting feelings into your work. |
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Re: DESCRIBE
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by vibes2go on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 01:45:34 AM AEST
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| nice to read you again .. |
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Re: DESCRIBE
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 02:01:26 AM AEST
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| nice very nice.well done |
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Re: DESCRIBE
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by paul_x_walker on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 09:28:57 PM AEST
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| its pretty good |
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Re: DESCRIBE
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 10:23:13 PM AEST
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This is really a beautiful poem, and i found it quite commical on how u ended it lol, very great write, good job!!
Jenni xxoo |
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