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Dwindling Hope
Contributed by
curtisc
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Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 12:50:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Things seem to falling right from underneath me,
and I can't control their descent.
This is not the way things are supposed to be,
why is this the way things went?
I had no control over how this worked out,
and that's why it hurts so bad.
Her love is one thing I don't want to be without,
it's the best thing my life has ever had.
I've come now to a fork in the road,
one way holds on to hope, the other lets go.
There's too much pressure, my heart wants to explode,
which way I will go I still don't know.
If I choose to let go I'll never know what could've been,
but if I hold on to hope it still might not ever be.
My patience towards this is beginning to run thin,
why did all this have to happen to me?
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Re: Dwindling Hope
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by Dusty on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 12:52:09 AM AEST
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Sad, sad write. I know this feeling well. Thanks for sharing!
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Re: Dwindling Hope
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by ElevenToedSloth on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 01:07:36 AM AEST
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Wow! This sounds uncanningly like something Dr. Seuss would write!
One fish, two fish...
red fish, blue fish.
Sam I am, I say I do... I do love green eggs and ham! |
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Re: Dwindling Hope
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by vibes2go on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 01:47:37 AM AEST
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| hmmmm patience ... hope .. get a rope |
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Re: Dwindling Hope
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by Kie on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 08:38:37 PM AEST
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Oh my, I don't know how to respond to this one. I definitely don't have the answers.
Very touching, to the point of aching. That is how this reader felt while reading it...
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Re: Dwindling Hope
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by O7NeVeS on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 09:22:17 PM AEST
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| Awww Curt...life is so unfair at times. I wish I could give ya some great advice, but if you know me at all, you'll know I have none! LoL Anyway, I thought it was a great write, as usual. Good Luck...Tanya |
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