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The Birthday Marker
Contributed by
rosewoodtree
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Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 11:15:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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in her mind she died
some time ago
but no one knows shes dead
there is no stone
to mark her grave
a cake she gets instead
blow out the candles
make a wish
shes so confused within
she puts away her supper dish
and knows that she has sinned
there was a time when she believed
how glorious it felt
untill the day she was concieved
and needed to be held
once again she is alone
but not like she was before
because now she is stiff
in her bones
and crying
in the core
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rosewoodtree
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2005-07-31 23:15:35]
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Re: The Birthday Marker
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by zer0_kool on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 11:23:28 PM AEST
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| GOOD....I really liked this poem!!! |
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Re: The Birthday Marker
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by xxbreathlessx on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 11:31:37 PM AEST
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| i agree. this poem is ironic and sad...very sad. keep up the good work! |
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Re: The Birthday Marker
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by Kuro_Mirai on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 01:07:19 AM AEST
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| Interesting poem, you're a good writer. |
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Re: The Birthday Marker
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by Ineedanap on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 03:00:33 AM AEST
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| Wow. SHort but it really makes you think. Im still in shock. Great poem |
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Re: The Birthday Marker
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by vibes2go on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 03:55:07 PM AEST
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| dead .. but she hasn't lain down? |
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Re: The Birthday Marker
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by rosewoodtree on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 11:38:37 AM AEST
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| Thank you so much for the wonderful comments |
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