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Love me, Hate me
Contributed by
freckle
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Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 10:55:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Love me, Hate me
Love and hate
and hate and love
The two tango
at polar opposites
How deep could we feel
the one
if we never knew
the other
Love and hate
Hate and love
Lukewarm is in the middle
Nobody likes lukewarm,
tepid
makes for nausea
So feel damit ,
feel
Either love or hate
but don't leave me
in your tepid indecision
Where my beating heart
will soon
stand still.
Make me feel
Feel for me
My heart longs to beat
with fiery emotion
Love or hate
Hate or love
The tango of life
dance with me........
Carol Sossaman
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freckle
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Re: Love me, Hate me
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by vibes2go on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 10:57:35 PM AEST
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| nice poem; but I'm a man-hater right now .. I have a gun and I'm hunting .. LOL |
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Re: Love me, Hate me
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by xxbreathlessx on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 11:12:41 PM AEST
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i really,really liked this. pushing us to feel soehting we are scared of. great job! i especially like :
"How deep could we feel
the one
if we never knew
the other"
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Re: Love me, Hate me
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by zer0_kool on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 11:17:18 PM AEST
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| good read....keep up the good work!!! |
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Re: Love me, Hate me
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by emystar on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 11:30:34 PM AEST
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A very meaningfull masterpeice.
Good work.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Love me, Hate me
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 11:33:36 PM AEST
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I like your expression alot in this piece Carol, and I didn't find you too rusty : )
The third stanza is my favourite, as it is so true, and speaks volumes...I also like the way love is pitted against hate in a reoccuring theme throughout this write. Your use of italics was good too, and it added substance to your words. However 'Damit' in bold stood out to me in a way it shouldn't have. I think I would've left it without the bold print, and instead either put the second 'Feel' in bold instead, or in italics even...Overall I think you did a wonderful job, and I enjoyed reading this!
Scorp. |
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Re: Love me, Hate me
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 01:14:27 AM AEST
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I really like this write it speaks to me lol.
well done.
hugs
p.s no picture from butt ugly :p |
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Re: Love me, Hate me
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by brokenwings on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 03:40:24 AM AEST
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your right no one like lukewarm, very good write, i enjoyed this alot
tasha |
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Re: Love me, Hate me
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 08:11:18 AM AEST
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Yes, lukewarm is the suck.
Especially when it goes cold.
--Ghost |
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Re: Love me, Hate me
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 08:08:01 PM AEST
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Magnifcent carol, u tell it like it is and yet so simple but make no mistake so effective, u most certainly know your craft great lay it on the line approach, rusty? where? . . .
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Re: Love me, Hate me
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 11:16:36 AM AEST
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Very good observations on the opposites in life, love and everything to do with it! It sure feels like a challenge placed upon the reader to experience both ends of the spectrum.
i especially liked the lines:
Make me feel
Feel for me
My heart longs to beat
with fiery emotion.
Well put.. keep up the fine writing.
dw |
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Re: Love me, Hate me
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 8th January 2006 @ 07:08:38 PM AEST
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Yes,few want that tepid middle ground,nonchalance is not an option.Passion please but anger rather that hatred for me.Short but gutsy poem that hit the mark for me.
'All those who believe in telekinesis,raise my hand'....that made me laugh. |
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