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Tears of Blood
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 10:04:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
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She is crying the tears,
That she’s held in for years
But these tears are unusual
They have a red visual
Her tears don’t taste of water and salt,
They taste of blood and it’s all her fault
For too long she has held back her tears
She held it all in, didn’t cry for years
Now her tears are full of pain
And her tears don’t look like rain
They are of a thick red,
Staining her pillow and bed
She can’t stop them from falling,
Now she’s in pain and is calling
She’s losing blood through tears
And there is no one near
Now she remembers why she’s crying
She was so sick and tired of trying
There was no one around
It was just her and her frown
The red- it’s is spilling out,
To stop the tears is a doubt
All that she has gone through,
She misses all and is calling to you
Blood spilling out her eyes,
Pouring out as she cries
Her tears are blood, not water,
To breathe becomes only harder
She sheds these tears,
All the blood over the years
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Re: Tears of Blood
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 10:10:35 PM AEST
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| Excellent...i loved it! I havent cried in a while...i just sorta lock all of my pain inside of me...and that isnt healthy...i know. But i loved your poem. It was awesome...just keep it up! |
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Re: Tears of Blood
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by zer0_kool on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 10:50:00 PM AEST
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| WoW...Amazing.....I can relat to this...the only diffrence is that i am a (male)....i Really liked it...keep up the good work. |
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Re: Tears of Blood
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by vibes2go on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 11:01:35 PM AEST
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| gee ... don't tempt me to get my razor again .. I feel like it.. the tears don't come and ... yeah well you know. It's one of those days.. cheer me up you did! |
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Re: Tears of Blood
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by Kitty06 on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 11:50:18 PM AEST
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| I like how you made the drops of blood be tears. I wrote something similar in my poem Silent Crimson Night. The lines 'Now she remembers why she’s crying She was so sick and tired of trying' really give this poem life and makes the line 'To breathe becomes only harder' more power. An excellent write. |
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Re: Tears of Blood
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 10:36:26 PM AEST
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wow this is a nice poem, i reely enjoyed this one, nice flow and greatness...lol n e ways good job!
Jenni xxoo |
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