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The Wanting
Contributed by
Writting_Fever
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Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 09:33:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You know that star,
That you said was ours,
I can see it now,
Now with new scars,
I opened my eyes,
I did, I can see,
You are the one,
That ment something to me,
I know it's late,
And I know your pain,
I didn't mean it at all,
Sitting in your car in the rain,
I made that mistake,
But I now take it back,
Please understand,
My heart's clear, not black,
You said you'll love me,
Forever and on,
So prove it now,
I can't linger on,
I didn't seem right,
Not there and not then,
But I don't know why,
I didn't need you just then,
I realize now,
I'm a wreck through and through,
If you're true to your quote,
Take me back, I love you.
Copyright ©
Writting_Fever
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2005-07-31 21:33:41]
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Re: The Wanting
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by emystar on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 10:01:54 PM AEST
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This is a very beautifull masterpeice.
luv it.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Wanting
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by vibes2go on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 11:03:35 PM AEST
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someone told me ..
he'd be mine "to the end of the verse"
guess the end of the verse came ..
this poem sounds .. like begging..
don't ..
hold on gently .. but let go when the time comes .. mine has..
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Re: The Wanting
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by xxbreathlessx on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 11:36:54 PM AEST
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| its sadly sweet. sorry for what happened but god job on the poem. |
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Re: The Wanting
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by broken_hearted09 on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 09:10:08 PM AEST
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| I love this poem .. its awesome! |
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Re: The Wanting
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by XxNights_ChildxX on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 10:40:23 PM AEST
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aww this ones so sad :( i luv it tho, great write!!
Jenni xxoo |
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Re: The Wanting
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by breny on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 01:58:36 PM AEST
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I can relate to this poem very well and I know your pain. Thank you for sharing through this well written poem = ]
~Brenna~ |
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