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Thy Dying Soul
Contributed by
aprillie
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Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 08:02:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Here I am again, left in this life of pain
Raindrops falling from thy eyes
Dead and cold thy heart is slain
In thy eyes, echoes thy souls shattered cries
Nine times have I felt I died
In this world of heartless sarrow
I tried and you lied, as I layed there and cried
Im my future, there is no marrow
Lay thy head on thy pillow covered in tears
Go to sleep for eternity, never to wake
Forget all the pain endured in the years
My soul is what thou did take
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2005-07-31 20:02:17]
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Re: Thy Dying Soul
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by vibes2go on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 11:07:29 PM AEST
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| adding to my own sadness.. I felt yours. |
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Re: Thy Dying Soul
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by xxbreathlessx on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 11:29:12 PM AEST
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| the poem was good ! but the imitation of shakespear needs work (please dont take it the wrong way)..its just shakespear wrote in sonnets...iamic pentameter.(ababcdcdefefgg) and he used more metaphors and imagery...but this poem was good.the pain was felt, very sad poem. great job! keep on writing! |
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