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Just Call
Contributed by
Dusty
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Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 04:29:18 PM in AEST
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When you're feeling bad,
Just pick up the phone,
You can call me any time,
You are feeling all alone,
I may be little and I may be loud,
I may seem quite insane,
But believe me when I tell you,
I will share your pain,
If you want to simply talk,
Or need to let off steam,
When the world is falling down,
Making you want to scream,
When you're friends are silent,
and noone seems to care,
You can always come to me,
I promise to be there,
Next time you're feeling crazy,
And noone's there to catch you fall,
All you need to do,
Is find a phone and call.
Copyright ©
Dusty
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2005-07-31 16:29:18]
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Re: Just Call
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 04:36:42 PM AEST
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Oh Dusty this is rare indeed! Most people are so self-absorbed in themselves they have no room for anyone else. How caring, and how loving this poem sounds to me, and I know others too!
I love your poetry Dusty, it's nice to once again read it and remember the kind you!
Thanking you also for your comments on my poetry.
Warm love
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Re: Just Call
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 05:44:45 PM AEST
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The rhyming scheme in this was very good, and the topic is heart felt. I like it, especially the last stanza. Good Job.
~D.S. Hammoulton~
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Re: Just Call
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by vibes2go on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 11:18:49 PM AEST
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Re: Just Call
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by emystar on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 11:53:11 PM AEST
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Very beautifull-n-awesomely sweet.
huggs,
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