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broken window pain
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 03:31:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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walking in a moonless sky
watching zombies strolling by
sold their souls another walking dead
looking at their eyes feeling their dread
cockroaches scurry on the city street
looking for that sale or there favorite coffee drink
the light of a car as they scope out the scene
selling there dope destroying people's dream
gangs and junkies marking their way
one will die by the end of the day
watching all this from my window view
seeing the shame as the population grew
blinded by green the kind that fold
watching this game i feel it grow old
dancing in death the girls make their stance
selling their bodies for that next hit by chance
rot in our world in these roads made of gold
truth isnt the answer so i am told
alone at my view a tear in my eye
waiting for this world to stand up and try
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lostrelic
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2005-07-31 15:31:07]
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Re: broken window pain
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by waos on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 04:06:01 PM AEST
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that was an awesome poem, i remembered your name and thought i'd
read this. you did a real good job, as sad and dark as it is. and realistic.
~kara~~waos~ |
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Re: broken window pain
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by smilez101 on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 05:06:59 PM AEST
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| That poem was so good because i see these same things day 2 day. It had actually made me cry because I felt it so much. Thank you for that one. |
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Re: broken window pain
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by suicidal_imbecile on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 06:39:18 PM AEST
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holy shat man, intense poem. I loved it. except for the fact that i am among those you watch. thanks for putting it in perspective for me
kate |
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Re: broken window pain
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by vibes2go on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 06:54:38 PM AEST
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waiting for this world to stand up and try
I liked this last line a lot ... |
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