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Hurts Like...
Contributed by
misunderstood_gurl
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Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 01:34:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I will never know love
But I will always know hurt
People kick me around
And they treat me like dirt
They tell me I’m useless
And I start to believe
But no one will ever love me
And pain is all I’ll receive
My pain hurts so much
But it’ll never go away
For it is mine
So it shall stay
I tell myself I deserve this
For I can never do anything right
So what’s the use of living?
Why can’t I just give up the fight?
This fight hurts so much
That I don’t know what else to do
So why can’t I just quit?
Because I know I will never make it through
It wont take that much
To just take my life
I could use a gun
Or maybe a knife
So why can’t I just do it?
It’s better than hurting like this
And it won’t even matter
Cause I wont be missed
I’ll just do it
Yes, tonight will be fine
Everyone will have a good life
But for me, I will take mine
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Re: Hurts Like...
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by vibes2go on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 01:48:23 PM AEST
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| The poem is .. filled with hurt; and I feel that, but it is simple and pretty much has been done a lot .. I think you could do a lot better and give it more thought.. I mean, hurt and dirt .. that's a really easy rhyme .. like love and above.. ya know? |
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Re: Hurts Like...
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 02:28:07 PM AEST
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| yea...i see what you mean...i love be creative and i guess this one just isnt very creative cause everyone has practically done this...so thanks. |
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Re: Hurts Like...
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by suicidal_imbecile on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 07:26:44 PM AEST
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look at your life, dont let other people determine whether or not you'll be happy. it must come from within you. It has taken me years to learn that. I know what its like to hurt. everytime something good comes into my life i screw it up. somehow i screw it up. i love horses, so i must get a horse, i love music so i listen to music, i love poetry so i sit here and write to you. please dont get swallowed by pain. do something you like to do and do it. who cares what people say, humans are all mistakes. i hope you can pull yourself outa this hole. oh and i loved the poem!
kate |
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Re: Hurts Like...
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by aprillie on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 07:44:05 PM AEST
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| I see so many poems exactly like this. I was once there, remember the pain. In your eyes there seems like no end, but in the end things get better. |
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Re: Hurts Like...
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by Naughtygurl on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 09:23:56 PM AEST
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this is sad , omg if you really feel like this you should talk to me i can come up with plenty of reasons you need to live , and why your awesome anyone who writes poems is willing to share a part of themselfs through their writing ... I know that because I know how you feel dont believe me read some of my poems ... good luck
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Re: Hurts Like...
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by sprinter27 on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 11:24:35 AM AEST
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nice yet sad write. and i hope that you don't take your life- cause, i'll miss you... i mean... we are friends aren't we? i'd miss all your poems and comments...so don't hurt yourself... please. i send lots of luck and hugs, good write, keep it up!
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Re: Hurts Like...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 02:16:45 PM AEST
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| Great write... but don't give up... I know i'm the last person to tell you this (as about 99% of my poems say differently) but suicide is never the answer... great poem.... keep up the good work |
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Re: Hurts Like...
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by guiltycircles on
Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 07:59:02 PM AEST
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| don't care if anyone says that it's been done before, it is a better option than suicide, it's full of talent and to write something so amazing when you're feelin so ***** is a great thing... keep going and writing more! |
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