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A Portrait Of Love
Contributed by
cuddlytiger17
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Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 01:06:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Soft notes mesmerize distant ears,
Their tune molding the indescribable;
Painting passion in a sea of emotion.
The colors slowly mingle,
Their meaning transcending conscious thought,
As their substance tenderly envelops you:
Each emotion bringing on a renewed sense of being,
As each wave surges stronger than the previous,
Washing over you in a tide of promising comfort.
Imagination and desire run wild
As the melody carries you away--
Leaving you breathless.
Copyright ©
cuddlytiger17
... [
2005-07-31 13:06:15]
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Re: A Portrait Of Love
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by bethie on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 02:00:40 PM AEST
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| A beautiful melodic poem. I like. |
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Re: A Portrait Of Love
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by xxbreathlessx on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 02:32:10 PM AEST
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| this poem is beautiful! you had me from the first line. i have to say, you have talent! you know how to use the vocabulary and how to make the image become alive. amazing job! |
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Re: A Portrait Of Love
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 03:59:48 PM AEST
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| Hey. great write. A sceptic when it comes to love is a wise person in my mind. Maybe i'm just bitter from past experiences. Well anyway nice write. It's nice to see someone of a similar age writing. Christopher. |
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Re: A Portrait Of Love
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 12:10:39 AM AEST
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If the number on your site name is illusive to your age, (17)
than these words are that of a prodigy..
if you're not, this work is still most profound..
excellent.
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