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deepest prayers
Contributed by
solosoul
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Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 12:51:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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i pray every day for the one that was meant for me
sadend that i cant pick who i want it to be
affraid to be sensitive and scared to not
what to do next without screwing this up
it feels like my last chance i guess you
can say this is my final dance
send me a voice something to go by
please dont let me be a victum
dont want to be a circumstance
her tears tear my heart open
the pain ill gladly bare but my pain
she cant see please show her i care
falling apart inside i let down my guard
hers still up and reinforced with steal
pray for the key anything to break her seal
wont let myself cry its not for me to do
my only care right now is to be there for her
peircing eyes and a soothing voice
am i perfect or just good enough
she showed me my heart isnt so tough
sacrifice everything i love i am reborn
anything to make this work or its back to
alone cold wet and tworn
be myself is what i think just to see
if myself fits the picture or even her dreams
as long as shes happy is all that matters to me
ready to run far away just incase
cant let her see the hurt that is on my face
so from now on the side ill show
my happiness even if im hurt
this is my prayer my request for love
mind of a tornado heart of a dove
control my feelings to soon to show
nobody can be sad im the only one who knows
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solosoul
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2005-07-31 12:51:29]
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Re: deepest prayers
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by Saint_41 on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 02:12:55 PM AEST
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| nice faith. good write |
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Re: deepest prayers
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by vibes2go on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 06:49:03 PM AEST
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mind of a tornado heart of a dove
I like this line .... |
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Re: deepest prayers
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by Overstated on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 07:18:12 PM AEST
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this had some good ldeas in it and is a strong poem interms of ideas.
feel free to comment on my work also at: http://www.your-poetry.com/modules.php?name=Your_Account&op=userinfo&username=overstated
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Re: deepest prayers
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by Monkeybones99 on
Monday, 6th February 2006 @ 06:20:37 PM AEST
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| I like this poem and alot of it I can relate to....keep up the writing. |
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