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Life
Contributed by
Jen54
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Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 01:11:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I feel I've lost myself
wondering off the path
I've fallen behind my shadow
into my rain
tears always find me
and the sun never rising
darkness is my light
losing how things were
only knowing the suffering of others
but do not worry
for i am not alone
in this never ending nightmare called life
Copyright ©
Jen54
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2005-07-31 01:11:42]
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Re: Life
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by cooley1818 on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 01:17:33 AM AEST
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| great write, i really enjoyed this, i can really relate to this, i feel as if life is nothing more then just a nightmare, or hell its self, it really sux to feel that way, but oh well, i just keep livin on and try to enjoy life if i can, and i hope u can do the same |
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Re: Life
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by paul_x_walker on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 01:26:31 AM AEST
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| so good keep it up wow post more |
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Re: Life
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 01:28:40 AM AEST
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No your right about that.....you have company that's for sure.
Great write tho, thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Life
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 01:34:43 AM AEST
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| nice ending i love the ending haha i always try to do that |
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Re: Life
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by bethie on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 12:25:12 PM AEST
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A wise man told me once that: "Life is a tough knot".
You express this very well in your poem. |
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Re: Life
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by sweetoccasion29 on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 01:14:59 PM AEST
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| this ran over with emotion, life at times is sheer hell great write |
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Re: Life
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 02:00:56 PM AEST
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This is a powerful and emotional write, I have felt the despair and sadness that you write of and I hope you find happiness !!! Well written
Hugs Leia36 |
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Re: Life
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 11:43:52 AM AEST
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| Jennifer, that was a emotionally powerful write. Happiness will find you and you will find happiness. This is very well worded and thought provoking. |
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Re: Life
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by emphaticplacebo on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 08:00:41 AM AEST
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Indeed youre not alone, Jen. Many others are sharing in similar pain and you are helping the fight by posting your feelings of anguish and suffering.
You have a great talent, keep it up!
Dan |
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Re: Life
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by Tiffyo4 on
Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 07:52:50 PM AEST
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your not alone and life doesn't have to be a nightmare if you have people who care deeply for you like i do
Tiff |
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Re: Life
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 09:42:48 PM AEST
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| you're not alone. life doesn't have to be a nightmare if you have people that care. |
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