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Paranoia
Contributed by
Asthenia
on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 11:05:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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"Paranoia"
The nightmares, the cold sweat
The numbness and blurred vision
The feelings being processed
The voices in my head
The panics rising up inside of me again
As I dream of all the hollow words that caved in
I should have been a pawn to a beautiful queen
But I was my own destruction this time it seems
All the pretty colors are turning grey
All the pretty moments have gone away
'Cause I can hear both of their hearts chyme
Somebody tell me it's all in my mind
Somebody tell me this desperation I feel
and the vomit on the floor isn't real
Quick breathing, tears seeping
The terror of error
The darkness drowning the light
The head-ache, the heart break
Farewell and goodnight,
farewell and goodnight to you
Copyright ©
Asthenia
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2005-07-30 23:05:27]
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Re: Paranoia
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 12:49:47 AM AEST
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I thought this was a very piece.
Very raw and honest indeed.
A great attempt at conveying one's private hysteria. I liked it.
Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Paranoia
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by xxbreathlessx on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 12:54:18 AM AEST
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| i think that from the beggining you really buid up tension in the reader and the automatically grabs thier attention. great write! |
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Re: Paranoia
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 12:56:17 AM AEST
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Very effective use of description here, good job
Raquel Leah :D |
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Re: Paranoia
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by summer on
Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 01:42:52 AM AEST
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liked this really conveyed well.
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Re: Paranoia
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by The_Unknown on
Wednesday, 9th May 2007 @ 04:34:37 PM AEST
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| This is a really good poem, I like it a lot. |
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