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Tears Upon My Shoulder
Contributed by
sir_odd87
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Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 08:37:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I held her close and listened
Something not enough people do.
And as she told me of her life,
Her tears soaked my sleeve through.
I held her even closer,
And whispered in her ear,
"No matter how bad you think you are,
I'm gonna stay right here."
She thanked me and apologized.
I couldn't understand.
There was nothing to apologize for.
I just took and squeezed her hand.
She thinks she is a nuisance,
She wonders why I stay.
I love her like she could never know,
So I let the tears fall where they may.
No one listens to her,
Or gives her time to cry.
They all claim to love her,
But no one does it like I.
To see her cry rips me apart,
But I still hold her tight.
Because I know I can help her through it,
And she's going to be alright.
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Re: Tears Upon My Shoulder
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by Unbreakable on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 10:03:51 PM AEST
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This poem is amazing. I can so much relate to the girl in your poem except for the fact that I never had someone I could cry to, who would understand. And let me tell you, she is so lucky to have someone like you. Great write..
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Re: Tears Upon My Shoulder
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by Dusty on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 10:55:45 PM AEST
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You are a wonderful poet and it sounds like an even more wonderful friend!! Great write, if only more men would stop trying to understand and just BE...
Thanks for sharing this!
Dusty |
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Re: Tears Upon My Shoulder
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by paul_x_walker on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 01:01:58 AM AEST
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cool great write tell your friend not to worry
everybody loves her
(hugs and kisses)
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Re: Tears Upon My Shoulder
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by Heartfilledblood on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 03:41:34 AM AEST
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Good write! Stick by her, dont leave her side. Dont lose connection with her. I wish the best for you :)
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Re: Tears Upon My Shoulder
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 07:56:55 AM AEST
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| Nice heartfelt and warm write. |
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Re: Tears Upon My Shoulder
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 11:35:09 AM AEST
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No one listens to her,
Or gives her time to cry.
They all claim to love her,
But no one does it like I.
To see her cry rips me apart,
But I still hold her tight.
Because I know I can help her through it,
And she's going to be alright.
Brought tears to my eyes reading this. What a superb friend you are. Not enough friends listen I mean really listen to whats in your heart and soul. She is very lucky to have you by her side.
Excellent
Love angelxxxx |
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Re: Tears Upon My Shoulder
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by solosoul on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 11:59:11 AM AEST
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| its weird that im in the same situation but thing is its not her fault she just blames herself so if you dont mind id like to let her read this ive never been good with verbal words so this will help me! your a great poet |
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Re: Tears Upon My Shoulder
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 10:51:10 PM AEST
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| I'm sure she thanks God everyday that he sent such an angel her way. Truly, when all the trouble is behind, she will be the most wonderful flower in the garden, because you have been such a wonderful caretaker.... |
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