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Abstract Horrors
Contributed by
Vampire_Slander
on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 07:41:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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fight these smog filled twilight's
oh how I ruin the sky
knot this rainbow into a noose
this ugliness I cannot forget
Ethereal at heart
burn this horror into my eyes
forever seeing
how could this be?
Be my chaotic
fill me with destruction
my fang filled tragedies
smells drowned by hate
Iron call's call to me
dusk has never been so dark
joyless stalkers
and still I ask
alone in a void
the demons watch
time ticks
I have been scorned
my everlasting question
rhetorical at that
still dreaming
wide awake
links of chains everlasting
these lies feed
tearing away my sanity
what was my question?
Copyright ©
Vampire_Slander
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2005-07-30 19:41:52]
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Re: Abstract Horrors
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by shelby on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 08:08:59 PM AEST
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got chills running my spine dark and awesome write loved it
Michelle |
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Re: Abstract Horrors
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 08:18:42 PM AEST
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killer write
it gave me chills as well
i am tingling
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Re: Abstract Horrors
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 01:00:58 AM AEST
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ahhhh very dark. With a hint of madness.
So powerdul indeed.
I loved the first stanza.
This was a black piece, but great to read.
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Re: Abstract Horrors
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by ruby_star_angel on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 07:43:32 PM AEST
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Wow, this is really chilling, hun. Definately a dark write, and I really like it ^-^ Keep up the good work, hun.
xoxo |
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