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With the Whole Heart I give to Thee!!
Contributed by
poet70
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Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 05:48:03 PM in AEST
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With my whole heart I give to thee,
Sharing it, open, honest, I know you see.
I need you to in return to share your whole heart,
I know you can, what a great place to start.
You and I together, a long and lasting life, forever
We can build a life together, making it strong, and for the better.
With my whole heart I give to thee,
In return do you give your whole heart unto me?
Questions needing answers, yes they do,
I want to always love, care, and cherish you.
You and I, yes, we are truly good for one another
So life must remain between you and I, always forever.
Tammi Pitman
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Re: With the Whole Heart I give to Thee!!
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 07:17:28 PM AEST
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Oh yes.. a beautiful poem... truly a very nice write
I like your style..
I love this line here:
*****Questions needing answers, yes they do,*****
true love communicates for sure..
The poem flowed very, very well..
Ty for sharing..
Raquel Leah (Poetress)
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Re: With the Whole Heart I give to Thee!!
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 07:23:11 PM AEST
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by the by.. forgot to say ..
I like your name poet70
May I say.. you are just that.. ty again.. nice write..
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Re: With the Whole Heart I give to Thee!!
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by Eclipse on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 06:58:37 AM AEST
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great to hear that you have found your soul mate- such an uplifting poem
luv eclipse xxx |
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Re: With the Whole Heart I give to Thee!!
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by lostwithoutyou on
Wednesday, 7th September 2005 @ 10:11:29 AM AEST
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Very very beuatiful poem.
Love,
Brina |
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