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Contributed by
misunderstood_gurl
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Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 01:25:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I scream so loud
But no one seems hears
Inside I’m lost and confused
Waiting for someone to help me out
But no one ever comes
Why don’t they come?
Why don’t they care?
I just need someone to love me
But no one seems to
No matter how hard I try
I can’t make them hear
I’m the girl that’ll always be alone
Sitting by myself in the back of the room
Waiting for someone to answer my cries
But no one opens their ears
I scream, and I scream, and I scream
But no one even cares to listen
No one even wants to listen
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2005-07-30 13:25:48]
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Re: Listen
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by vibes2go on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 02:28:48 PM AEST
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| I can feel this and relate .. it's like you scream inside .. as loud as you can .. still: it reverberates back unheard ... good expression of your feelings ... |
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Re: Listen
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by paul_x_walker on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 01:19:20 AM AEST
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really good poem
(hugs and kisses)
Jennifer |
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Re: Listen
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 10:38:48 PM AEST
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i hear, i do- and i know i suck at it, but i'm trying to be a good friend. sorry if i'm bad at it. but if i helps, i feel the pain, too. please, know that i know your pain, i hear your screams and i care- i do, i really do, cause i hate it that you are going through pain similar to mine. please, break away from it and fight it all- please, don't live in pain like me. i care about you... please, understand that.
~sprints
p.s. good write, keep it up! |
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