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Stubborn
Contributed by
Benny14
on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 02:51:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I will stare down the sun ‘til I go blind
I will walk this earth, let my feet undo
I will best these mountains at their game of patience
Just to prove my point to you
I will shout ‘til it fills these walls
I will rebuild a spider’s web as good as new
I will bear the boxer’s blows
Just to prove my point to you
I will write ‘til even Shakespeare is weary
I will find twin snowflakes two
I will force monuments to cower
Just to prove my point to you
I will float the river Nile
I will make the stars align on cue
If just for one single moment
You realize how much that I love you
Copyright ©
Benny14
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2005-07-30 02:51:42]
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Re: Stubborn
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 03:36:37 AM AEST
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this is beautiful and straight from the right.dont give up,shes very lucky for this and she will relaize it!well,good write.i understand how u feel.t/c.
love always,
andrea
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Re: Stubborn
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by vibes2go on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 03:49:38 AM AEST
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I will find twin snowflakes two
did you mean the "two" 'cause normally it would be too..
but I love that line..it's a gem!!! |
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Re: Stubborn
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by Kie-Kie on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 04:27:18 AM AEST
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This is so sweet... I think if they read this they'd realize how much they meant to you
Great poem
Love ya,
~Kiela~ |
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Re: Stubborn
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by Dusty on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 04:45:12 AM AEST
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This poem is perfection! I love it so much, I read it three times. It flows well, also.
Dusty |
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Re: Stubborn
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by paul_x_walker on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 04:58:46 AM AEST
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| pretty good |
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Re: Stubborn
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by priss on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 05:11:37 PM AEST
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| cute poem, like it alot! |
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Re: Stubborn
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by bethie on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 10:34:01 AM AEST
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| What determination! This is very touching and admirable message. |
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Re: Stubborn
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 06:17:58 AM AEST
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wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwoooooooooooWWWWWWWWWW!
for a minite I thought it was a duplicated write but I think? the last line on the otther stubborn said but I will wait for you????
not sure but still reding.
smiles,
emy |
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