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I Hear the Forest singing
Contributed by
Shattered_soul
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Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 02:32:32 AM in AEST
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I hear the forest singing,
deep within the mountain.
Water rushing through the streams,
wind whispering through the trees.
No secret is untold
throughout the forest land.
Once its past your lips,
the wind snatches it at hand
Turning every rock
snapping every stick,
rustling every leaf,
splashing every stream.
Wind greadily steals the secrets,
passing them throughout.
to the cunning fox,
even to the hungry snout.
When darkness covers land,
wolves come out to howl
every secret is no secret
within the forest land.
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Re: I Hear the Forest singing
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by vibes2go on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 03:50:48 AM AEST
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| This made me soooo relaxed .. loved it. no secrets eh? hmmmmm |
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Re: I Hear the Forest singing
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by Kie-Kie on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 04:29:46 AM AEST
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I'll admit, I first read this poem because your name is the name I used to use when I'd go into a chat room that I went to often.... but now I'm SO glad I read this!!!
This poem made me feel so tranquil and calm... you've got a way with words... I hope you know that... you're a wonderful poet :)
Love ya,
~Kiela~ |
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Re: I Hear the Forest singing
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by EverlastingDawn on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 10:17:40 PM AEST
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Wow. I love your work, you seem to be able to bring your words to life, so that they take the reader on a sort of journey. ANother great write. Please don't ever stop making poetry, you have some real talent.
~Dawn |
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