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My Four Elements
Contributed by
boy_in_blue
on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 06:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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the power you weild
is like that of the sea
like a wave over sand
you swept over me
you are like fire
you set my heart ablaze
you warm up my nights
and brighten my days
you take me by storm
like a gailforce wind
and against the wall
my heart is pinned
and like the earth
you're my solid ground
you are my island
from the sea all around
you're all of these things
and you are my girl
like earth,fire, water and wind
you make up my world.
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boy_in_blue
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2003-01-12 06:30:00]
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Re: My Four Elements
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by SmokinJoeEvil on
Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 01:10:21 PM AEST
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| Interesting idea describing love using the 4 elements. Good poem. |
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Re: My Four Elements
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by wordsy on
Tuesday, 14th January 2003 @ 09:06:14 AM AEST
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A very good write, full of the fire with which you write.
wordsy. |
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Re: My Four Elements
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 04:39:57 PM AEST
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| Great write .... love this one too. |
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Re: My Four Elements
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by yellow_sundragon on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 07:06:14 PM AEST
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Great write.... never would have thought of giving love the aspects of Nature, but it works...
YS |
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