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I Feel Betrayed
Contributed by
Serendippitty
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Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 11:27:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I feel as though a knife has been plunged into my back
by my very own best friend
Its funny how I knew this would happen
I knew how this would end
I thought I told you not to see him
because he meant something to me at one time
He hurt me and upset me
You do this kind of stuff to me all the time
Everything you do
pushes the knife deeper into my back
you stab me and you hurt me
more than I can keep track
What kind of a friend are you
seeing him behind my back
thinking that Id never know
thinking Id attack
Im bigger than that
but I am still a little hurt
because you couldnt resist the chance
you had to flirt
you had to throw yourself at him
out of all the fish in the sea
you couldve found a guy
that didnt mean that much to me
But no this is much sweeter to you
to take something that was once important to a friend
Because you will be jealous of me
until your lifes end
Is it worth it
is any guy worth it all
To betray a friend
you are adding this to the list thats tall
of all the things that youve done to me
and i cant take it anymore
You anger me
youre such a whore
So long dear friend
Youve hurt me one last time
Youve made me so made
Youve made me rhyme
So enjoy your man
but dont come back to me
When he breaks your heart
who can you come to see???
Copyright ©
Serendippitty
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2005-07-29 23:27:33]
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Re: I Feel Betrayed
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by ElevenToedSloth on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 12:04:29 AM AEST
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It's just like everyother heartbreak poem.
If your looking for good poetry, try making things a little less... boring?
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Re: I Feel Betrayed
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by HOPE4ME2 on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 01:56:55 AM AEST
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Isn't it wonderful that we have the written word to help us deal with emotions. Found this intense.
Blessings
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Re: I Feel Betrayed
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by vibes2go on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 03:41:49 AM AEST
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| pain like this is .. well writing about it helps; so keep at it .. I felt the pain ... |
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Re: I Feel Betrayed
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by vibes2go on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 03:46:02 AM AEST
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| Offensive comment removed. - Please stick to site rules.. Moderator_16 |
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Re: I Feel Betrayed
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by Dusty on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 05:09:55 AM AEST
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| I did not find your poem one bit boring. Poetry is nothing you can define, it is a means of communication. Good Job. |
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Re: I Feel Betrayed
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 04:16:06 PM AEST
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ha, next one in line to find out the very same hurt.. First warnings were not heeded, no considerations on their part..
One tries to live in the courageous field of being up ahead of the weak ones who have strong short comings
A sneaky user, getting next to the weak part of a soul.
The untrusting, unworthy, uncaring, greedy and lazy type of individual does this.. who are lost, who lose out, long before they get started.
The losers finally use up everyone, there is no where to go.
They will not have true friends, or be one..
The enemy thrives on such pain and dandy makes sure others keep them company.
A true friend will come.. and when they do.. you will never have to worry.. they will not even have it in their minds to do evil to you or in the world.
At least once in our lifetime, we will all have encountered such a person .. once discovered, do not walk.. run fast, do not look back..
Nice write.. hits a soft spot in many I am most certain..
Raquel Leah (Poetress)
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Re: I Feel Betrayed
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by dreamer_4_eternity on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 05:31:35 PM AEST
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| I didn't find this boring at all and it's very well written and flows smoothly plus its even better than that since people can relate to it, a lot of people i mean |
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