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I'LL DISAPPEAR
Contributed by
PRECIOUSBECKY
on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 04:19:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Go Ahead-
Laugh, You think I'm funny-
I'm dying already
So steady
your knife
Keep taking my life- my sanity
Mental health rare these days
Days I'm afraid- everyday- every way
Shut out what you say
HARD as a rock
TOUGH as nails
Just keep on pushing- I'm turning pale
can barely breathe
Pretty soon you won't even see me...........
I'll disappear yeah that's what I'll do................
I'll disappear.
Copyright ©
PRECIOUSBECKY
... [
2005-07-29 16:19:17]
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Re: I'LL DISAPPEAR
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by dragos099 on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 05:08:58 PM AEST
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| as you might have realised you are not alone.. what I wrote is what i'm fighting with right now.. and the truth is that i relate to your poem too... best wishes |
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Re: I'LL DISAPPEAR
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by kaosar on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 06:24:56 PM AEST
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you'd really better disappear to another place or life .. somewhere you may find your happiness and piece.. if anything hurts you just leave.. never stay.. noone has to suffer ..
take care.. |
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Re: I'LL DISAPPEAR
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by colinbaker62 on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 06:30:15 PM AEST
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That is anguished. I get the feeling that many poems on this forum are about anguish and / or self-harm, which is both sad and interesting in its own right.
Colin |
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Re: I'LL DISAPPEAR
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by Urizen on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 06:58:21 PM AEST
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| Strong and very powerful, you bring the reader into the poem vividly, I really liked it, thank you for sharing it. |
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Re: I'LL DISAPPEAR
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by je2ica3 on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 10:39:01 PM AEST
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| powerful |
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Re: I'LL DISAPPEAR
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by AnaBanana on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 11:23:26 PM AEST
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| wow kinda intense...im kinda feeling like this now...nice job |
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Re: I'LL DISAPPEAR
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by Dusty on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 05:01:25 AM AEST
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I was happily flowing along with the poem when the last few lines just kinda hit me. Very Powerfil.
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Re: I'LL DISAPPEAR
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by priss on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 02:12:13 PM AEST
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| it sucks when you are dying on the inside and no one can tell. and all you want to do is be able to tell them but you can't. it makes everything you are going through so much harder. i love this poem, and i know exactly how it feels. |
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Re: I'LL DISAPPEAR
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by artjunkiekyle on
Monday, 19th June 2006 @ 01:03:03 PM AEST
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This has got to be like my favorite piece from you! I for some unknown reason can connect with your poem and the message it conveys in my head.
Peace, love, and bubblegum!!!
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