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Blood filled thoughts
Contributed by
clowns_can_burn
on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 04:17:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A cold dark room filled with violent screams
Turn to the right, Strike to ignite
Lock the door and watch flesh burst into flames
Stare at the boiled souls and burnt hearts
Curl into a ball and lay in the shame
A burning red room filled with silence
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2005-07-29 16:17:13]
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Re: Blood filled thoughts
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by Urizen on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 06:54:00 PM AEST
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| amazing imagry, strong, powerful and straight to the point, thank you for sharing it |
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Re: Blood filled thoughts
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by je2ica3 on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 10:42:32 PM AEST
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| awsome write |
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Re: Blood filled thoughts
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by AnaBanana on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 11:26:37 PM AEST
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| wow....extremely to the point...idk what to think except great job! |
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Re: Blood filled thoughts
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by Crimson_Rose on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 01:43:30 AM AEST
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| Wow, very poweful. Great imagery as well. |
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Re: Blood filled thoughts
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by Dark-one on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 02:19:27 AM AEST
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| this is great, so vivid, can't wiat for more |
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