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Lonely Girl
Contributed by
Beni
on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 03:55:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Left in the dark,
So alone in a meaningless life,
Begging to break free,
From the loneliness inside.
Trapped in this world,
With no one to turn to,
Everyone’s attention,
Pointed at the wonderful girl.
She took everything,
Leaving me with nothing,
Everything I once held dear,
Gone for eternity.
Ignored by my family,
I seize to exist,
They don’t know I’m here,
So I gradually fade out of the picture.
Copyright ©
Beni
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2005-07-29 15:55:35]
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Re: Lonely Girl
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 04:23:01 PM AEST
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| This is so sad but I can totally relate to the story , are you talking about me? GREAT POEM |
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Re: Lonely Girl
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by kaosar on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 06:31:41 PM AEST
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| this is so nicely written, eventhough it's really sad. may be you should try to forget about them and just do what satisfies you and makes you happy .. they'll definitly notice your existence very soon.. |
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Re: Lonely Girl
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by je2ica3 on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 10:44:21 PM AEST
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| good write |
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