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My true feelings
Contributed by
twobabies
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Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 03:53:04 PM in AEST
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You ask me why I look so sad but I tell you I'm alright.
You should know by now there is something wrong and I just wont say.
I can feel your lips touch mine but the emptiness overpowers the kiss and I pull away.
I felt nothing.
I always feel nothing.
Sometimes when I sleep I picture you waking up the next morning a different man but it never happens.
I ask myself if I should stay and the answer is always yes but I'm not satisfied with that.
I want to love you, I do love you, but I want it to be more.
The kind of love in movies and books that takes your breath away.
I'll never get it.
I had it once but I lost it a long time ago.
I miss him, I miss you.
If you could be the man I want you to be I would be happy, that wont happen in this life.
So I will take what I have with a grain of salt and hope that one day I will be happy with you.
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Re: My true feelings
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by juliette on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 09:28:02 PM AEST
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Awww - Kayla! It's good but so sad......... It makes me want to cry........Sometimes you just gotta take the good with the bad baby and if the bad outweighs the good, then you are in the wrong place. Only you know what you feel in your heart and you can not make your heart love somebody. It kinda has a mind of its own........I love you though and I love your poem! Thanks for sharing!
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Re: My true feelings
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by je2ica3 on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 10:45:03 PM AEST
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Re: My true feelings
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 02:37:15 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem Kayla, showing your true feelings, even though sad. You have the best remedy when you wrote this poem. It's your pen............hold it often and put your feelings down on paper alot. That will really help you, and then since you can't change him, try changing you, and if you become more joyful, bet he will too!
WELCOME TO YPDC KAYLA, We are so glad you joined us. Welcome aboard, you are really going to love it here, I know. I've been here a long time, I've actually lost count, and everyone has been so kind generous to me, I know they will you too!
Go out and make lots of comments, so everyone will see your name and then they will comment on your poetry, and that's how it works here for sure!
Warm to you Kayla and thanks to you for your lovely comment too!
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Re: My true feelings
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 09:04:06 PM AEST
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I feel your pain Kayla..
it's very evident in your write
which is very good.
I find it only necessary to say that trying change people, is a difficult task at best-
Much love and happiness to you in the future.
B
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