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Shadow
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poet_of_anger
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Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 02:03:02 PM in AEST
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You saw me there
You didn't seem to care
That I was waiting for you
You saw me there
You left me behind
You never said goodbye
Love wasn't worth the tears that fell
I forgot how it felt... to feel
I am a shadow
Surrounded by everyone
Still I remain alone
I am a shadow
I gave you all I had
Still we are nothing you said
Love wasn't worth the tears that fell
Love wasn't worth it at all
Love was doomed for me to fail
I forgot how it felt... to feel
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Re: Shadow
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 02:13:36 PM AEST
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| I like this poem, a very good write. |
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Re: Shadow
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 02:25:31 PM AEST
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| Great poem. Love the last four lines. keep up the good work!!! |
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Re: Shadow
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by PuppyChow on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 08:11:43 PM AEST
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nice lyrics. im a lyric writer myself, i didnt even know that 'lyrics' choice existed....:P
anyway, good job. liked it alot!!!!! |
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Re: Shadow
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by je2ica3 on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 10:46:58 PM AEST
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| good comment |
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Re: Shadow
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by AnaBanana on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 11:29:56 PM AEST
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| nice job |
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Re: Shadow
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by Dusty on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 04:59:32 AM AEST
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Great write. I truely liked this one, very to the point!
Dusty |
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Re: Shadow
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by ceazer2005 on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 03:05:27 AM AEST
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| hey awesome write! I especially liked the line "I forgot how it felt... to feel." what a way to get your point across |
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Re: Shadow
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by Amicus on
Monday, 25th September 2006 @ 05:32:12 PM AEST
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| It was very good. I loved the last 5 lines. |
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