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Have a Good Day
Contributed by
bethie
on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 12:15:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Woke up to a beautiful day
my name was written on the sky
the sun came out to play
don't need wings to fly
got a star in heaven
happy as a clam
I am blessed times seven
the world is eating out of my hand
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bethie
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2005-07-29 12:15:28]
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Re: Have a Good Day
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 01:35:52 PM AEST
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| Lol did you really mean happy as a clam? That made me laugh, I thought it was cute how you wrote that, anyway I liked your write, very good expressing words. |
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Re: Have a Good Day
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by dreamer_4_eternity on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 01:56:14 PM AEST
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| This was cute, and I agree, the happy as a clam expression made me laugh... this all flowed together nicely and it does cheer me up |
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Re: Have a Good Day
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by je2ica3 on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 10:47:56 PM AEST
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| goo write |
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