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whispers
Contributed by
dragos099
on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 07:40:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Whispers, sighs, promises forgotten
Remembering the past
Trying to forget the future
Still memories are hard to face
Shining through time
A love long gone
It feeds the mind
And consumes the heart
Words killing the last shred of hope
Like swords are cutting through the soul
Leaving open wounds
Just waiting for time to pass
Scars remain for all eternity
To tell the story that only they know
In the silence of the night
They start to bleed again and show their woe.
Believing in an outcome
But remembering the pain
The diamond heart has turned to stone
In the middle of the river it now stands alone.
Copyright ©
dragos099
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2005-07-29 07:40:30]
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Re: whispers
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by Zandria on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 08:05:36 AM AEST
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It is a double edged sword when one comes across the path of a kindred spirit.
Well done. |
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Re: whispers
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 10:29:48 AM AEST
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Excellent write.
Liked the style.
Jeff |
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Re: whispers
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by Erualaitalmarea on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 11:15:59 AM AEST
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| This sparked images in my mind that I have known for very long now in my heart , good write |
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Re: whispers
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by that_gypsy_fire on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 12:10:13 PM AEST
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great poem.
"Scars remain for all eternity
To tell the story that only they know
In the silence of the night
They start to bleed again and show their woe"
I liked that part especially, and I think we've all been there at one point or another. nice job |
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Re: whispers
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 01:52:31 PM AEST
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| This was a good write. |
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Re: whispers
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 01:53:06 PM AEST
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| Amazing poem. Love the rhythm, keep up the good work! |
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Re: whispers
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by dreamer_4_eternity on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 02:00:16 PM AEST
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| I really enjoyed this write, the scars remain for all eternity stanza was great and something we all can relate to... this piece flowed wonderfully and it had a deep meaning to it, and I think you did an awesome job on this write. |
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Re: whispers
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by dragos099 on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 04:41:45 PM AEST
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| i want to thank you all for your beautiful words. they mean a lot to me. dragos |
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Re: whispers
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 04:49:05 PM AEST
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| I CAN RELATE ESPECIALLY TO THE THIRD PARAGRAPH// I WAS STUNNED AT HOW WELL THIS POEM DESCRIBES MY PRESENT SITUATION /// THANKS FOR SHARING IT,,,, |
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Re: whispers
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by Adrianna on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 08:05:31 PM AEST
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| It made me cry. I love it. Keep writing. |
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