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THE OCEAN
Contributed by
angelrae
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Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 04:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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The very first time I I saw the ocean, I could not believe my eyes.
It was an unending mass of water underneath the deep blue skies.
The beauty of the color of the ocean was too amazing to be true.
I saw an everlasting assorting colors of brilliant blue.
Looking at the ocean, was as priceless as a rare jewel find.
This wondrous display, I will never forget, as it is deeply embedded in my heart and mind.
I wanted to feel the ocean with my feet and hands.
I felt like I needed permission from God to enter the ocean after the sands.
To finally take myself in the ocean hand in hand with the one I love, my lifetime soulmate,
A dream I always had in my life since I could remember, which I could never forsake.
Everything about the ocean did I delight, the smell, taste, feel, sight, all the creatures great and small, the plants all therein,
I shall never forget this very special piece of Earth's grandeur during my lifetime's journey, for it is in my heart and soul never to die or to sin.
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angelrae
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2003-01-12 04:00:00]
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Re: THE OCEAN
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by gina on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 06:45:16 AM AEST
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waw , this is a beautiful description of the ocean , im glad u were inspired , this is gr8
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Re: THE OCEAN
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 10:55:19 AM AEST
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Wow.This is good. I wish that for the 12 years I lived beside the ocean that I had never taken it for granted. But I'll be back to it soon, 4 or 5 years. This is really really good. But I wouldn't go so far as to call the salty water something to delight the taste. It's perdy icky.
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