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To Paint You
Contributed by
juliette
on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 07:58:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I long to paint you,
minus the circles enveloping your eyes,
the wear and tear of this time; this place,
my pallette cleansed of shades of grey
and melancholy blue.
I long to paint you in my light,
enhance the curl of your lips,
the effect of that devilish smile,
neutral hues melded to perfect
the shine of soft skin.
I long to paint you,
as you might envision me,
lively and pure, livid and pained,
perfect only under the guise
of your softest brush.
Copyright ©
juliette
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2005-07-28 19:58:07]
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Re: To Paint You
(User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 09:52:22 PM AEST
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I must admit that in reading this, I was to only return the favor
of you reading mine..
but now, I will track your work
like a wolf tracks prey.. lol
1st stanza's best-
though I enjoyed it immensely in it's entirety..
5 stars from me juliette on this.. these words.
Billy |
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Re: To Paint You
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by Kie on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 08:24:09 PM AEST
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This is magnificient, truly.
A creative friend sparks the muse doesn't it?
This had passion, elegance and something I can't quite put a finger on but I am hopelessly smitten with it.
Five stars and then some...
Kie |
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Re: To Paint You
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by twobabies on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 09:27:33 PM AEST
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| beautifully written babygirl...i love your poetry...it brings out the poet in myself...luv ya |
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Re: To Paint You
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by Uncertain_Oblivion on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 03:04:32 PM AEST
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| this was nice...relaxing even. Thanks for sharing. |
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