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Addicted
Contributed by
ginsdance
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Tuesday, 23rd July 2002 @ 09:00:57 PM in AEST
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For Heaven sakes!
Take a break!
Don't get up at 6 am
And then stay up so late!
The computer, I promise, won't sprout legs,
And it has no wings to fly,
So please just put up your feet
And rest some by and by.
I do believe that you're addicted
To the hum of that machine,
But I don't know about support groups
I could enroll you in, for that kind of thing!
I really just for just one day
That you'd just watch TV,
Take a stroll, sing rock-n-roll,
Or just go to bed and sleep.
The computer will still be here
After your one day of fun,
I don't know, but I'm pretty sure,
That it won't sprout legs and run!!!!
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ginsdance
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2002-07-23 21:00:57]
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Re: Addicted
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 23rd July 2002 @ 10:28:52 PM AEST
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LOL I love this...sounds like me at times...
Very good write!!
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Re: Addicted
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by Chrissie on
Wednesday, 24th July 2002 @ 05:48:06 AM AEST
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ooo did you write this for me Gin? ...fits me to a tee. I loved this..
Chrissie x |
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Re: Addicted
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by Kassidi on
Wednesday, 24th July 2002 @ 06:30:53 AM AEST
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Wonderful poem. I think we all can relate to that. This sure put a smile on my face! (lol)
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Re: Addicted
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by Rose on
Wednesday, 24th July 2002 @ 12:35:15 PM AEST
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I use to be really bad, when the game Doom first ever came out in DOS, long before windows 95 came along, but I was addicted totally, played every single version there was and knew every single secret, with the highest level you could play. Well still like to be on the computer, since I am alone, and no sinificant other or anyone to hang out with,so I tend to be online alot. its cheaper then paying for cable, which I had dissconnected. Don't think the tv will sprout legs either!!! :)
Good funny write...... Amber Rose :) |
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Re: Addicted
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by spaceotter on
Thursday, 1st August 2002 @ 02:04:14 PM AEST
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| I hear this!! I think I'm addicted to this site. Great piece. |
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Re: Addicted
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th July 2004 @ 05:51:35 PM AEST
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lol. I must say I've been earbashed by this routine, being a child of the 80s.
Didn't do me any harm, i think . . .
Nice write, again. Original and amusing. |
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