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A Million Tears
Contributed by
RavenShadows
on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 12:30:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I listen to the wind blow
So softly through the night
Our voices trapped inside the wind
Since the time we said goodbye
Your memory is my companion
My broken heart is my best friend
My tears are the description
Of how I'll miss you to the end
My nights are never-ending
They are sleepless, empty, and cold
Holding on to your memory
Its the only thing that I know
I fear these wandering nights
Its just a sea of broken dreams
I find my arms so empty
And your not here with me
I cry a million tears
Each one drops with the same wish
That some day....
You will return......
To me
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RavenShadows
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2005-07-28 12:30:33]
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Re: A Million Tears
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by Sexi_Lexi on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 01:16:46 PM AEST
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| Nice poem! I really like it! Well done xx |
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Re: A Million Tears
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by zenaprincess on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 01:26:57 PM AEST
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| I know well the feelings you've described so descriptively. Loved it. |
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Re: A Million Tears
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 01:31:23 PM AEST
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Very sad and longing for the one you miss...
I especially like the ending that said each falling drop of rain fell with the same wish... it just paints a really beautiful picture.
keep up the fine writing.
dw |
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Re: A Million Tears
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by TeenageDirtbag on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 02:01:06 PM AEST
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Beautifully worded ^ ^
Your memory is my companion
My broken heart is my best friend
My tears are the description
Of how I'll miss you to the end
I love those lines. |
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Re: A Million Tears
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by gabby521 on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 02:33:35 PM AEST
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| Unfortunately, I know all too well the memory-filled, sleepless nights you speak of. Great poem. |
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Re: A Million Tears
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by Kie-Kie on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 03:57:11 PM AEST
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I know this feeling... don't get too consumed in your lonliness though... you'll miss out on some great people... take enough time to heal, but don't shut out those that want to be near you...
Take care and love always
Love ya,
~Kiela~ |
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Re: A Million Tears
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by xxbreathlessx on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 04:10:22 PM AEST
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| wow. powerful imagery here. i Loved this. its sad,lonely. ots very well written and i love how you ended this. |
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Re: A Million Tears
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by Erualaitalmarea on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 11:24:10 AM AEST
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| I know exactly how you feel...this moved me to tears |
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Re: A Million Tears
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by Kie on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 08:29:40 PM AEST
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This is definitely a kleenex grabber.
Oh my, the reader just feels this, I mean really feels, what you are saying.
"I cry a million tears
Each one drops with the same wish
That some day....
You will return......
To me"
Very moving, intense and you wrapped it up with an emotional (unforgettable) ending.
Kie
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Re: A Million Tears
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by Kitty06 on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 07:11:45 PM AEST
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| This poem cut it really close. I think this was a gorgeous poem until the last line. It just didn't seem to fit with the rhythm of the rest of the poem. Otherwise a great write. |
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