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Life
Contributed by
Bruce
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Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 07:39:09 AM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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Life
Traveling a long life's highway
you run into, many unusual things
From the day that you are born
you never know, what the next day brings
Having exited your mothers womb
and now breathing on your own
You try desperately to absurb
all the things that you are shown
You hear many different voices
talking to you each day
Each one trying to teach you
in their own special way
You grasp what you can
at this tender age
The learning process will get better
as you pass from stage to stage
Your early years pass by
and now you enter school
Learning something new
using your brand new tool
The years now move faster
and you are learning what Life's about
You will have good days and some bad
of this there is no doubt
Romance is coming too
your first love will be there
Feelings you never had before
and that you were totally unaware
Your school days pass by quickly
your Life is moving on
Your teenage years almost over
as you enter, a new dawn
What will you do next
is college in the air
Have you thought about your future
and how you will prepare
Do you want to be a doctor, or a lawyer
or are other things on your mind
You must choose very carefully
the right choice you must find
The years that lie ahead
your future is at stake
What you do with your Life
is a decision you must make
THink about, if and when you marry
and the children that might arrive
All the possibilities that are out there
and what is needed to survive
You just never know
when your Life might be over
And you find yourself burried
deeply in the clover
Hopefully you made the right choices
and your Life was all you desired
You had a very happy Life
and by all you were admired
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2005-07-28 07:39:09]
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Re: Life
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by emystar on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 08:38:27 AM AEST
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A masterpeice full with wisdom from the days of our lives.
Great write.
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Re: Life
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by inoc on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 09:46:32 AM AEST
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What a splendid poem Bruce
Makes you think ....life moves ever so fast....and all those decisions and choices there is to make on the way....
and the bottom line....hoping you were admired after all those years!
a wonderful -thinking about life- poem
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Re: Life
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 10:51:26 AM AEST
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that was an excellent, well written piece of work! i liked that it pretty much covered the basics in this life.. and then some.
keep up the fine writing!
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Re: Life
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by Beni on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 01:14:09 PM AEST
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This is a great poem. It shows the true extent of life and gives us something that we can truely think about
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Re: Life
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by shelby on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 03:16:40 PM AEST
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this was so warming to my heart Bruce a very lovely write
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Re: Life
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 10:27:32 PM AEST
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This was 80 years wrapped up in the 15 seconds it took me to read it..very glorifying, were all the verses..
I had a moment's thought at each..
bittersweet in the end that this proverbial life
had to end at all..
I enjoyed this very much Bruce-
B
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Re: Life
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 12:37:30 AM AEST
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| a master piece is right awsome job |
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Re: Life
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by paul_x_walker on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 09:31:00 PM AEST
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| wow awesome poem |
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Re: Life
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by remote on
Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 08:55:19 AM AEST
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| Good work. |
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