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Just Disappear
Contributed by
russ-dawg
on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 12:15:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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it would be so much better with out you here
no one loves you no one cares
you know you want to just disappear
no one would notice
can you smell it the sweet smell of death
you are so close take an extra pill
guns are good too for that long time rest
but once your gone you can forget the cutting
forget beating yourself
once you are gone you can not come back to do it agian
so enjoy it make it good and last long so you will never forget it
make it painful so it can feel as good as it does thinking about it
no one loves you no one cares
you know you want to just disappear
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2005-07-28 00:15:02]
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Re: Just Disappear
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by emystar on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 01:16:24 AM AEST
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Very sad but well said.
I can relate 'cause before I got on the right anti depressent I use to have these thoughts-n-feelings.
huggs,
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Re: Just Disappear
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 08:39:25 AM AEST
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| it's very sad that you felt this way... it's good to know that you're better now though... |
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Re: Just Disappear
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by In_a_while on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 10:29:15 AM AEST
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it's full of anguish and sadness... but it's message is heard. it's a very good expression of your feelings
keep up the fine writing
dW |
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Re: Just Disappear
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by Sexi_Lexi on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 11:30:56 AM AEST
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| It is a very good poem and i know how u felt so i think that it is good 2just let it all out! Well done! xx |
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Re: Just Disappear
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by Beni on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 01:17:45 PM AEST
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| This is a good poem well done. This shows the extent to which life can lead and i completely understand how you feel as i have been in this position. This shows the true feelings of how people cope to those who don't understand. |
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Re: Just Disappear
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by AnaBanana on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 03:22:06 PM AEST
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| nice! |
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Re: Just Disappear
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by Kitty06 on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 07:01:35 PM AEST
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| A powerful write. The line 'so enjoy it make it good and last long so you will never forget it' is the best part of the poem. Though I think you could do a lot more with this poem. It has the feeling of only being the first stanza or two of a great poem. Add to it, describe the possible deaths and what comes after them. Keep posting. |
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