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Under Different Circumstances, This Would Be A Love Song
Contributed by
TeenageDirtbag
on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 11:46:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I don't care if I'm ugly
I don't care if you love me
I don't care if I'm unhelathy
So unhealthy
So unstable
So unworthy
But I suppose I'm not quite unusable
I don't care if I'm ugly
Don't care if you hate me
I know I don't deserve this
But now I've seen what I have missed
All I want is one more kiss
I don't care if you hate me for it
Don't care if you deny it
Wouldn't mind if you love me for this
So unhealthy
So unworthy
So, so, so unstable
Could you stop with all the labels?
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2005-07-27 23:46:28]
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Re: Under Different Circumstances, This Would Be A Love Song
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 12:09:46 AM AEST
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I like this...it's simple, but it oozes of fresh love lost, and that's very relatable...Nice job!
Welcome to YPDC btw : )
Scorp. |
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Re: Under Different Circumstances, This Would Be A Love Song
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by brokenwings on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 05:20:35 AM AEST
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Very nice write, i enjoyed it much,
keep up the good reads,
tasha |
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Re: Under Different Circumstances, This Would Be A Love Song
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by Beni on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 01:24:53 PM AEST
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| Yes this is a great poem. Well done. xx |
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Re: Under Different Circumstances, This Would Be A Love Song
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 02:39:23 PM AEST
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| Great poem, love the style of it. Well done!!! xxx |
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Re: Under Different Circumstances, This Would Be A Love Song
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by Kitty06 on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 11:18:16 PM AEST
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| A poem of pain, they're always so good, but they always come with a high price to pay. I like the repetition of the 'lables' it really gives the poem its flow and rythm. Though, would it be rude of me to ask, why are those lables used for this poem? |
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Re: Under Different Circumstances, This Would Be A Love Song
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by XOashleyreneXO on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 05:55:11 PM AEST
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this is a very deep and good poem ... i personally love it ! i think that it adds different types of losses and loves all together into one poem ! really good ! keep it up ... write more and more ... i'd love to read 'em !
Love Ashley Rene ! |
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Re: Under Different Circumstances, This Would Be A Love Song
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th September 2005 @ 05:05:25 AM AEST
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| Very well written. I like this poem, and I like your style of writing. |
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