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Dead
Contributed by
EmoDCgirl36
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Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 10:08:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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It's all your fault she said to me
I couldn't believe what I heard about me
My family is in ruins
My life is now dead
My life totters between a push or a bed
Lazy eyes stare up at the ceiling
Counting the many cracks and feeling
That I am by myself on this cold and dead night
No one will come without a goodbye
So I snap the light off that I didn't know was on
And I snuggled into the warmth of the burning sun
I laid there until I couldn't feel anymore
Now my life is no more.
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Re: Dead
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by TeenageDirtbag on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 11:28:44 PM AEST
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So I snap the light off that I didn't know was on
And I snuggled into the warmth of the burning sun
I laid there until I couldn't feel anymore
I like those lines ^
I can understand swinging between states of mind. I've done that a lot. Depression, happiness, hopelessness, hopefulness...it gets confusing after a while, I know. o-o IM me if you ever wanna chat or think I can help perhaps? AIM: akafreak27 |
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Re: Dead
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by edwynne on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 09:24:32 AM AEST
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Hey I liked your poem, dark and honest, good write
B sure to message people from the site if you feel down, thats wot I do and it cheers me up nicley, the websites not just about sharing poetry but feelings too!! man I feel like trisha :}
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