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Soul Rot
Contributed by
Kitty06
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Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 09:30:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I cock my fist and shoot it neatly threw the window
Thousands of shards float for a heartbeat before my escape is known
They've locked me in this glass prison studded with pretty diamonds
Look your best, sit up straight, no one wants to see you crying
Sit, primp, pose, stay
These are the subliminal commands I hear everyday
But tonight I win, tonight I escape
Hurry now, I escape my spirit's rape
I've lived through all the pain and all the lies
I've been where you wake up and wish that in your sleep you would've just died
No one hears my screams
No one saw my life split at the seams
A glistening veil had been draped over my box
That prison of see-through walls and indestructible rocks
I flee into the night, my preppy sweater and ankle length skirt ditched
My war paint: My eyeliner, my black heels, my mini skirt pleats just barely an inch
All that is trendy and sexy I don with glee
Into the party my glory is now seen
Touch me, you can, I'm actually here
No more fantasies, no more hopes and dreams
I'm actually here, for real and for truly
And I joke that it's better to be fashionably late than early
They can't catch me now, they can never bring me back
My life is finally on the right track
I'll live this life whether they like it or not
I live
I breath
I love
I see
Never again will my soul rot
Copyright ©
Kitty06
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2005-07-27 21:30:14]
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Re: Soul Rot
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by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 09:39:05 PM AEST
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| the sense of long yearned freedom defit netly comes out here. i liked how you kind of told us oyur story, of how your life was,how it felt and compared it to the now. well written! |
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Re: Soul Rot
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 11:35:02 PM AEST
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nice write. a real "screw you" to anyone that tries to be controlling or restricting. very emotional, too.
just curious, what kind of music is it that you listen to?
wizard |
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Re: Soul Rot
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by TeenageDirtbag on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 11:37:20 PM AEST
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o-o Beautiful. I love your metaphors. But also how you changed tones a bit from start to finish. It started out angry and ended rather defiant.
I'll live this life whether they like it or not
^ That is the attitude to have right there. ^ ^ It's a great state of mind, one that I have recently found myself in. "***** the world if they can't understand. I'm going to do what makes me happy." |
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Re: Soul Rot
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by 66pinkponys on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 11:50:18 PM AEST
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I feel the same way,
I love this. |
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Re: Soul Rot
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 09:06:14 AM AEST
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holy hell!
this is amazing.
and VERY harsh stuff too.
but i like this alot! |
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Re: Soul Rot
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by spirit_of_dark_tears on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 04:50:42 PM AEST
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i feel the same way traped it the metal shell that soscity puts on us just because we dont follow the main stream its a living hell nice words describes the underworld of people who arent tools to the main stream super right prepy capitolist soscity good job
if you need to talk to anybody im all ears good job comrade |
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