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The Internet Battle
Contributed by
CarolinaBlue
on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 09:17:04 PM in AEST
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Sitting here
Logging on
Page is loading
Awww Come on!
Moving at
A sluggish speed
Losing patience
Yes indeed!
Will I get there?
Cannot tell
Stuck inside
this online hell!
2 minutes pass
Count 1 to 10
Refresh the screen
And start again
I think I got it!
Half way there
This cannot be
An error there
Server problems
Is what it said
Please try later
My face blood-red!
Boiling point
Has now been reached
Enraged I sit
And grit my teeth
Reboot the system
One more try
Reached "nowhere" fast!
System awry
Face in hands
Admit defeat
Without hesitation
Ctrl+Alt+Delete
SHUT IT DOWN!
I've had enough
Of bits and bytes
And sites corrupt
Hackers, viruses,
Modems too
Being booted
Damn Yahoo!
Two words
are all I have to say
"Fork" you, my friend
You've won today!!!
©CB 2005
~written after the site crashed & countless hours of trying to log on , sorry, it just came flooding out, I'm blaming it on Kie's Spork of Doom(hence the second to last line), tee hee~
Copyright ©
CarolinaBlue
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2005-07-27 21:17:04]
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Re: The Internet Battle
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by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 09:24:22 PM AEST
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| hahaha, i loved this !! i can defitnetly relate (even wrote one like it looong time ago) it funny entertaining and relatable. great job! |
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Re: The Internet Battle
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by vibes2go on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 09:24:43 PM AEST
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| my system has been real slow too .. and all my poetry disappeard for a few minutes .. I thought there was a conspiracy LOL |
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Re: The Internet Battle
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 10:17:29 PM AEST
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cool poem blue u go girl tell it like it is straight from the heart . . .
Ben |
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Re: The Internet Battle
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 10:34:44 PM AEST
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I have to second your emotions here, lol. It is funny when we get mad at a machine and all the inanimate parts that make it run. But we do harsh battle sometimes. Yes,it is funny later, but not at the time. I love this. Reminds me simply too much of ME. Now going to wash my mouth out with soap as some filth came out earlier. : )
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Re: The Internet Battle
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 11:04:44 PM AEST
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LMAO..
I echo those sentiments Blue-
(you must be dialing?)
and as for yahoo..
$%@#! to them as well!
"Face in hands
Admit defeat
Without hesitation
Ctrl+Alt+Delete"
lolol...Been down that road many times my friend..
I feel ya..lol
Stark Raving Mad Write Blue!!
I love it!!.. lol
Billy
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Re: The Internet Battle
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 01:35:12 PM AEST
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| lol can definatly relate. Reminds me of the time I had an hour long argument with the computer... and it won! Great poem, keep it up!!! |
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Re: The Internet Battle
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 02:41:51 PM AEST
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Dear Blue,
How wonderful of you to write about all of us, at one time or another!!!I wish I had your email address, I'd send you some good pictures for this poem........I've got some dozzies!!! How many times this happens to us all. And I think you did the right thing. Although I ususally kick it first, then turn it off! *smiles* How enjoyable a write to read, but it's not funny at the time, it's terribly frustrating!!!indeed
Warm love and quiet nerves
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