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Child Tears
Contributed by
killer_kassie13
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Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 08:13:52 PM in AEST
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Under the covers and beneath the bed she hides from her father and the thoughts in her head.
Screams from his anger cry out through the night as her fallen father bruises and beats out her lights.
A tear not must she shed for the fear of her father making her dred.
Until the day of her death her poor drunken father wont give it a rest.
From the harsh lashes he lays on her chest.
No matter if she pleads for the win, her tattered father wont give in.
For her, his daughter is so full of sin.
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Re: Child Tears
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 08:23:28 PM AEST
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heartbreaking . I grew up in an alcoholic household rarely got the beating it was just many other things matters not its a hard way to grow up
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Re: Child Tears
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by Aaralyn on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 08:52:29 PM AEST
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| That is a very intense and heartbreaking piece! I too have a piece kind of like this! It really is horrible what is out there in this world! Good write! |
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Re: Child Tears
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 09:28:43 PM AEST
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| That's terrible...not your poem...your poem was awesome. I mean its just so terrible how a child's father can hurt them so much when they are suppose to be the people their child trusts and looks up too. If a child cant trust their own father...who can they trust? I''m only 14 but my whole family drinks...except my mom. But my father has never beat me. Gr8 write. Keep it up. |
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Re: Child Tears
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by Kitty06 on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 09:41:03 PM AEST
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| Wow...So much said in such a short poem...This is a truly amazing write. I really feel for you if you were able to write this amazing poem because of experience. But if you didn't then you are even more freaking awesomer at capturing such pain and suffering in so little words. The last line is so powerful and leaves the reader wanting. Again I say, truly amazing. |
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Re: Child Tears
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 11:22:56 PM AEST
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| true lives, unless glorified, are the ones everyone love to ignore. this is a good reminder. |
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