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Words are not Enough
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
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Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 08:01:54 PM in AEST
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If I was a painter
I'd paint a picture of bliss
blues and yellow, with a dash of pink
If I was a singer
I'd sing a song for you
righteous melodies, humming along
If I was a cardiologist
I'd pump your heart full of love
sweet emotion flowing, to a rhythmic beat
If I was a gardener
I'd grow something savory
gingerly love it, and with thyme watch it blossom
If I was a photographer
I'd capture the essence of you
develop and fix any wrongdoings (Framing your beauty...)
If I was a magician
I'd pull your love out of a hat
make your troubles disappear in a cloud of white smoke
If I was a ventriloquist
I'd pull your heartstrings
have you say what I long to hear
But instead I'm just a writer
penning my emotions on paper
Poetically wording what I cannot say...
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Re: Words are not Enough
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 08:04:12 PM AEST
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and what a writer you are this is a beaut!
Michelle
made me feel so good* smiles* |
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Re: Words are not Enough
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by Mangos on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 08:28:47 PM AEST
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i think iv heard that song you are talkign about....
lol
awesome write
i absolutly loved it
my favorite was
if I was a magician
I'd pull your love out of a hat
make your troubles disappear in a cloud of white smoke
beutifully said,
touched me
nice as always scorp |
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Re: Words are not Enough
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by xxbreathlessx on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 09:10:55 PM AEST
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| this has become one of my favorite poems that i have ever read. but of course i should have known coming from you it would be great. i love,love,love the concept,the imagery,the longing and the sweetness in this poem. amazing job. keep on wriitng. |
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Re: Words are not Enough
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 10:16:16 PM AEST
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Your imagery is outstanding and the concept here of "If I was" made it an enjoyable read. It brought my imagination to it's peak, enjoyably, then let me back down to earth with the simple truth "But instead I'm just a writer". I think it is just splendid the way it let you weave it through your own mind while reading.
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Re: Words are not Enough
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 10:16:59 PM AEST
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| "Poetically wording what I cannot say" -- yet you say it amazingly well. This is a beautiful well written poem. Please, please, keep them coming. |
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Re: Words are not Enough
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 10:33:43 PM AEST
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your more than a poet scorp your what kindness is all about i know first hand
if u were a poem you'd put dickenson2 shame a very lovely write as alawys . . .
Ben |
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Re: Words are not Enough
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by TeenageDirtbag on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 11:51:23 PM AEST
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| Hehe I like this. Cute concept. |
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Re: Words are not Enough
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by juliette on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 11:53:35 PM AEST
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I almost skipped right over this poem and I am so glad that I didn't. This is so good! I love it! The themes in each verse the whole feeling it renders - this one rocks! Thanks for sharing!
juliette
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Re: Words are not Enough
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 02:10:10 AM AEST
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Scorp,
This is really sweet, and addicting , I have read it again and again !! I love how you portray your feelings in this , another 5!!!!!!!!
Hugs Leia |
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Re: Words are not Enough
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by SocialMisfit on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 03:53:19 AM AEST
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scorp your just so awsome lol, i was gone for two weeks here and wana know the first thing i did when i got back? read your recent poems lol. you have so much talent and this poem displays that, again another great poem.
SM |
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Re: Words are not Enough
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by brokenwings on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 05:29:56 AM AEST
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thats how us writers are, we write beauty, yet cannot speak it, but this was an amazing write, i enjoyed it very much,
tasha |
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Re: Words are not Enough
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by inoc on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 10:20:36 AM AEST
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I love how this whole poem went....a lovely song that sings in all our heart
coni |
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Re: Words are not Enough
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 08:01:09 PM AEST
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Ah Scorp, from my fav. song from 1927.
"If i could do anything at all, I'd do it for YOU!"
You've captured this one so well my dear friend. You never cease to amaze me. Done with style and pure talent. As always your radiance shines through ur work. Such flare with a pen u have.
Hugs,
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 10:56:36 PM AEST
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I think I know the song..; )
but in fear of being wrong ..I digress..
love the play on words in the 4th..
and the whole write as well..
It's analogy and metaphor at it's finest Scorp.
5 from me...very well written.
Billy
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Re: Words are not Enough
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 06:42:23 AM AEST
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brilliant job
all the stanzas are flawless
great writing |
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Re: Words are not Enough
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 02:44:16 AM AEST
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You are such an awsome talened writer scorpy.
hugs |
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Re: Words are not Enough
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 02:42:21 PM AEST
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| But if given the chance, you'd live every moment of what you write, wouldn't you? :-) And it's the moments that count in the end. This was beautifully penned and I hope you find what you seek. Blessings, J. |
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Re: Words are not Enough
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by remote on
Friday, 9th September 2005 @ 11:22:09 AM AEST
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| Quite enjoyed this one. |
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