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What did you find?
Contributed by
hardrocker15198916
on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 12:32:30 PM in AEST
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oops
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scorching hot
it burns my back
tearing up
my scars in place
whatve i got
if none to lack
shut up!
and hide your face
evil wench
tell me another
kill the cells
destroy the mother
sacred runes
that told you nothing
but you still percieve
that they know it
hide it now you vile submission
take a hit fall to the collision
break the lies that held your mind
what now is discovered; what did you find?
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2005-07-27 12:32:30]
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Re: What did you find?
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 12:44:05 PM AEST
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wow, that was definitely edgy and full of venom... very good though. I definitely like the third stanza, i don't know why though.. it just stuck out in my mind
keep it up
dw |
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Re: What did you find?
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by Kie-Kie on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 01:57:31 PM AEST
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Wow... I'd hate to get on your bad side and see this side of you... I hope whoever made you feel this way is goign through their own pain to make up for putting you through this...
All in all it was a wonderful poem
Love ya,
~Kiela~
(who knows she's written many poems where she sounded more vidictive than she'd like) |
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Re: What did you find?
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by JGB on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 01:11:16 AM AEST
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She must have cheated on you. That's the one thing to call for hate like that.
good luck |
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Re: What did you find?
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by candysears on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 09:04:21 PM AEST
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Learn to forgive...Poem is great!
God Bless!
P:S: Hope to read more of your work! |
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Re: What did you find?
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by ever1der on
Friday, 31st March 2006 @ 11:52:35 PM AEST
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| I feel the anger and rage .. you really made it come through. |
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