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Your Devoted Insomniac
Contributed by
brokenbutterfly
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Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 03:35:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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Lying here late at night, I realize
I am your devoted insomniac.
I don't sleep. I think of you.
I spend all day thinking of you
And it always creeps into my nights too.
The sun has set and the moon has risen high
But still I lie awake and sigh
Thinking of you- tonight and everynight.
I can just see the stars from where I lay
And I wish on each and every one
That one day I'll be yours, to have and to hold.
I whisper these foolish dreams to the night
But only my pillow can hear what I say.
The sane are all asleep now
But I'm not sane, not even close.
You are my desperate insanity.
Everything I think is you.
Everything I say is about you.
Everything I do is for you.
Why can't you see?
I don't sleep.
I am your devoted insomniac.
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brokenbutterfly
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2005-07-27 03:35:02]
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Re: Your Devoted Insomniac
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 06:27:51 AM AEST
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| Beautiful yearning..well wrapped. keep writing on. venkat |
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Re: Your Devoted Insomniac
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 08:46:42 AM AEST
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I like this.
Some of the lines in ti were really good. I like this:
"I whisper these foolish dreams to the night
But only my pillow can hear what I say."
I can relate to that.
There is a strong sense of longing.
Good write,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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