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THE FINGER #2
Contributed by
brokenwings
on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 02:09:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I once told you of my words
wasn't my sign enough proof
that i don't want you? My finger!
I can't believe I loved such of goof
You destroyed my love and my heart
now its not my ring finger I give to you
nor the one I point with
YEAH THERE YOU GO! THAT MIDDLE ONE!
The one that says it all
its your sign, not your call
SIT ON IT AND SPIN, I CONTROL WHEN
(((((IT STOPS)))))
Got the point now,
or must I flip it to you once again
i don't care I'll do it anyway
this finger is all i have to say
Copyright ©
brokenwings
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2005-07-27 02:09:03]
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Re: THE FINGER #2
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by Kitty06 on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 10:21:23 PM AEST
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| I find it a little entertaining that you managed to make something vulgar, such as the sign of the middle finger, well written to express rage without being blunt. Nice write. |
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Re: THE FINGER #2
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by fireispassion on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 08:04:23 PM AEST
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| very interesting poem i like it!!!!! but then again i can picture myself doing the same so it makes it all the more entertaining!! hehe nice job!! |
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