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Waiting
Contributed by
thepizzaguy
on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 10:53:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The wind whips through the trees,
tossing them about like a concubine’s fans.
And then comes the lightning,
illuminating every inch of the sky.
Followed by the thunder,
that rumbles with an angry satisfaction.
And there I stand on the sidewalk,
…waiting for the first drop…
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thepizzaguy
... [
2005-07-26 22:53:29]
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Re: Waiting
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by Brandyx7 on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 11:12:39 PM AEST
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| I would have to say.. of all the poems.. I have read today on this site.. This oneright here is my favorite. I love it! See, usually, I like longer poems better.. because, generally, I think they have more feeling and power.. But, this covers it all.. you explained everything.. and for that I give you two thumbs up. |
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Re: Waiting
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 01:37:55 AM AEST
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WOW!! Simply amazing!! Your imagery was so good... I could almost feel and hear the forces of nature approaching.... well done!
Jenni |
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Re: Waiting
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by MnMnMsrcool on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 08:30:58 PM AEST
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| wow...I really like this. I have to agree that I normally like the longer ones but this one says so much in not so many words. I like it! |
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Re: Waiting
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by brokenandinlove16 on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 05:10:00 PM AEST
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| *chuckles*... i just got a picture in my head of you standing outside lookin at the sky with a puzzled look on your face....lol.... great job... u took my there with great details!!! |
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