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Lovely Irish girl
Contributed by
mekhled
on
Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 12:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Lovely Irish Girl
Tears my asks
What I need
A pretty smile
A hot love
What that I need
Lovely Irish girl
Sad heart my asks
What want?
Delicious kisses
From here sweet lips
Take me
Far and far
Behind the sea
Behind the moon
Lovely Irish girl
Me ask ...
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2003-01-12 00:40:00]
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Re: Lovely Irish girl
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by darkeyedman on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 07:52:58 PM AEST
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| this poem is great. i mean it should be published somewhere. great style, and a neat tricky way of telling. i reallllly liked this. jim |
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Re: Lovely Irish girl
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 06:54:16 AM AEST
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| beautiful........... |
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Re: Lovely Irish girl
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by riverofwords on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 09:14:55 AM AEST
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simple in its complexity of emotion
caprtures the essnce of a love so deep
i liked it ... way to go |
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Re: Lovely Irish girl
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by LadyDama on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 02:44:12 AM AEST
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| being an irish lassie myself, i adore this little poem... blessings... |
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Re: Lovely Irish girl
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 09:02:36 PM AEST
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Beautiful lilt to this piece! Interesting, though, the grammar must be some other language than English! Cleverly told.
Andrew |
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