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Fountain of Youth
Contributed by
bethie
on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 11:16:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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When they said:
"Don't burn your bridges",
I guess you didn't listen
Now you are swimming
like a fish is
In a pond of watered-down
wishes.
But they say that
"Hope springs eternal",
Every day a chance
for renewal
from imagination's fountain
fresh water in a pool
Copyright ©
bethie
... [
2005-07-26 11:16:21]
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Re: Fountain of Youth
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by Brandyx7 on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 02:37:32 PM AEST
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| Usually, I don't like short poems, because I don't think that they are powerful enough to share and spread a message.. But, this one clearly is very powerful and the words speak for themseleves. |
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Re: Fountain of Youth
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by Brandyx7 on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 02:37:35 PM AEST
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| Usually, I don't like short poems, because I don't think that they are powerful enough to share and spread a message.. But, this one clearly is very powerful and the words speak for themseleves. |
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Re: Fountain of Youth
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by Brandyx7 on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 02:38:33 PM AEST
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| Usually, I don't like short poems, because I don't think that they are powerful enough to share and spread a message.. But, this one clearly is very powerful and the words speak for themseleves. |
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Re: Fountain of Youth
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by candysears on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 10:14:39 PM AEST
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This is one powerful message
Brilliant write.
God Bless! |
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Re: Fountain of Youth
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 08:39:11 AM AEST
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| Another great poem, I'm not minding their lack of length so much now, they seem able to stand on their own (very small lol) feet even with such brevity. I'll have to read more when I get back from class. |
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