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A WHISPER
Contributed by
Bruce
on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 08:56:20 AM in AEST
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A WHISPER
Someone whispered in my ears
yeah, I reckon in my dreams
Its not just the thoughts you have
it is also your hopes, it seems
You constantly think about
how the future might unfold
Day by day,your mind wonders
what does your future hold
Will your lover, be a part
or just a passing thing
Will he or she,in your life
bring to you everything
All that you imagined
life was all about
The happiness you yearned for
and don't want to do without
Life will be so wonderful
if and when this day arrives
And that constant whisper,that you have
becomes a part of both your lives
Copyright ©
Bruce
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2005-07-26 08:56:20]
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Re: A WHISPER
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by Randyjohnson on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 09:13:11 AM AEST
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| Great poem. |
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Re: A WHISPER
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by bernard2 on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 09:13:32 AM AEST
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| Easy to read very expressive poem. I hope that you find this love one day, Keep smiling from bernard2 |
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Re: A WHISPER
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 11:03:53 AM AEST
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Beautiful write, Bruce. A lot to think about, isn't it?
Jenni |
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Re: A WHISPER
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 11:51:44 AM AEST
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a nice dream and thought.
good write |
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Re: A WHISPER
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 12:19:42 PM AEST
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a lovely write Bruce seems we all have that whisper around us at times
Michelle |
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Re: A WHISPER
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 10:16:38 PM AEST
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| Great poem I liked how it talked about the future, makes you think of what is to come. -Becca- |
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Re: A WHISPER
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 10:51:19 PM AEST
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So gracious-
A nobel write this..my friend
You've a lot of heart.
Sincerely,
Billy |
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Re: A WHISPER
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 11:40:33 PM AEST
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Ahhh, to hear that whisper once again in my life. I listen oh so carefully but my memories wont't let go and let me be. Yet!! Soon for us both I hope.
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Re: A WHISPER
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by paul_x_walker on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 09:32:05 PM AEST
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very interesting good job
(hugs and kisses)
Jennifer |
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