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sad song
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 05:34:46 AM in AEST
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alone and lost everyday of my life only wanting love to give
affraid of love affraid to live
since i was eight i wanted it to end
pain in my mind hate is my friend
slicing my arms for attention at school
no one cared for this lonely fool
i gaze at the wall i built around my soul
just a black heart with one giant hole
looks dont count good looking people are alone to
if you saw my life you know why im so blue
beaten and touched since the day i was born
thrown in a life that was already torn
feeling so small alone in the night
never a coward would i take my own light
but still i feel dead alone in my tomb
waiting for death to come sing its tune
screaming at darkness alone in the fight
why is this hatred feel so right
i will walk on dont get me wrong
i just listened to a really sad song
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Re: sad song
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by cooley1818 on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 05:46:23 AM AEST
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| I really loved this poem, it was deep, with alot of emotion, i can really relate to this also, great job |
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Re: sad song
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by Randyjohnson on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 09:17:59 AM AEST
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| This sounds similar to what I've gone through. I enjoyed this poem. |
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Re: sad song
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 12:29:54 PM AEST
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very sad indeed written with such conviction. Keep walking as life has its ups and downs and sometimes it seems as though there are more downs than ups there is a shining spot around the bend my friend
Michelle |
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Re: sad song
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by Brandyx7 on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 02:49:52 PM AEST
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| I can truly relate... and I think that is what makes a great poem even better.. having a connection between the reader and the poet.. that is a very special bond. |
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Re: sad song
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 03:42:05 PM AEST
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it's very honest and offers readers a glimpse into how you feel.. the purpose of poetry.
i was taken by it
take care and keep up the fine writing
dw |
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Re: sad song
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 10:53:08 PM AEST
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| I can get a idea how you feal its hard , Life is always hard. I've fealt this was numerous times and Great write.-becka- |
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Re: sad song
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by emystar on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 05:09:01 AM AEST
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I luv the way u let us know that u want give up even tho life is hard like this when we hear the sad songs.
Remarkably written.
huggs, smiles, prayer,
emy |
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